Wednesday, 12 June 2013

Writing a conversation

"Ouch" I cried with tears streaming down my face, as I feel to the floor.
I see people crowding me but a I could feel was my head stinging.
"Jess, Jess?" Paris said in a worried voice. " I'll go get a teacher!"
The teacher came over and helped me outside to get a drink of water.
"I am so so so sorry Jess" I could hear her in the background.
"My friend hit me in the head with her heel when she did a handstand," I cried as I told the nurse.
After school I went to the doctor.
The doctor said" It is just a concussion and if she starts feeling sick or sleepy make her to the hospital,"
On the way home I feel asleep in the car.
I woke to my mum calling.
"Jess Jess wake up!"


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